Autor: aitor_czr Datum: To: Emiliano Marini, dng@lists.dyne.org Betreff: Re: [DNG] Quick start guide to uprading to Devuan and,
configuring minimalism
On 17/12/15 12:48, aitor_czr <aitor_czr@???> wrote: > On 16/12/15 22:04, Emiliano Marini<emilianomarini82@???> wrote:
>> >Thanks, let me know if it needs corrections or has misspellings.
> Your translation is very good, i only did minor changes:
>
>
> - Ahora es posible*continuar* con la actualización --> Ahora es posible
> *empezar* con la actualización (We just started !!)
>
> - entrar en pánico --> asustarse
>
> - remover --> eliminar
>
> - proceder --> continuar Now in the other way around!! And several
> times... Surery this is due to the differences between American and
> European:)
>
> - xinit y iniciar --> xinit*e* iniciar
>
> - En el proceso de eliminar dbus -->*Al* eliminar (*although beingright*)
>
> - Los ahora huérfanos paquetes --> Los actuales paquetes huérfanos
>
> - un gestor de login*para* utilizar --> un gestor de login*que poder*
> utilizar
>
>
> ... The rest of the changes are due to my*pedantry* ...
More changes:
los paquetes *que* sí deseados --> los paquetes sí deseados
Well, i will put it somewhere, after consulting my doubts about licences.