On Sat, Mar 21, 2009 at 02:02:28AM -0400, Yaakov Nemoy wrote:
> In some ways, the critic is right, as a native english speaker, it
> could sound more like an advertisement than an encyclopedia article
> (read: it doesn't sound boring enough.)
indeed, i agree on this and wasn't really protesting against that tag,
rather than against the deletion tag.
the article could be improved big time and OTOH we should learn
improving our texts so that they aren't sounding like
http://www.brawndo.com/
> I've made it more boring, please feel free to comment and make
> changes.
thanks
ciao
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